2007年12月22日 星期六
eyesight
I found that my eyesight became much worse than before. I ordinarily wear contact lens in the daytime and wear glasses at night. Sometimes I feel not comfortable with my eyes but I didn’t pay much attention on it. I did not discover it until I went to buy a daily disposable contact lens today. It is just because I took the wrong type of contact lens home, and I returned to the company to change for the right type. I was suggested to examine again to make sure about my eye degree. If I did not make this mistake I will never know about my eyesight.
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Your first sentence needs trimming: Delete the expression "I found that". It's not used in this way. In this paragraph, you have to say "My eyesight has become..."
Your third sentence is also unnatural. It should be "Sometimes my eyes feel uncomfortable, but I haven’t paid much attention to it".
The last two sentences need rewriting as well: "It was suggested that I have my eyes examined again to make sure about my prescription. If I had not made that mistake, I would never have known that my eyesight was getting worse".
You're still young, so you have many more years during which your eyes will get worse.
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