2007年9月19日 星期三
daydreamer
It is my first time to clean up since I moved to my new house. I remember that when I was finding a new house, I preferred to choose a large space house. I imaged to decorate my house look like a Japanese house (tatami). However, imagination is always wonderful, but different from reality. Because the space is too large, it took me almost three hours to clean it up. It did not become a Japanese house but a normal house. How come did I want to a large space? It made me wipe the floor over and over again. Next time I should not daydreamed about my house.
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A more natural English sentence would be "This is the first time I've cleaned my house since moving into it". And "I wanted a {large / spacious} house".
"Because the house is so big" might better.
"How come I wanted a large house?", but this might be better as "Why", you might ask, "did you want a big house?"
I'm not sure what you mean by "It made me wipe the floor over and over again."
"I should not daydreamed" should be "I should not daydream": the tense gos on the modal auxiliary "shall/should", not on the main verb "daydream". A good grammar point for discussion in class.
So far, all your blogs are well written and clear, except for that one sentence I mentioned.
Bill
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