What can make you feel so happy? Is it a comedy, dance music, or something else?
If you ask me, my answer must be “chocolate.” I like to eat chocolate, especially dark chocolate. The milk chocolate is too sweet for me, so I prefer to dark chocolate. Why I want to talk about chocolate? My classmates and I went a market tonight to buy some commodities. What I bought is food, in other words, all chocolate. They laughed at me because I bought chocolate instead of buying commodities. Don’t you like to eat chocolate? Come on, it is tasty. Trust me, if you eat once, you will love it!
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Not "so happy" here, but "very happy". You can say something like, "I've never been so happy" or "I've never seen you so happy" or "I never expected to be so happy". In these three sentences, the "so" means "this", not "very". If someone asks you "How do you feel? You look sad", you might say "I don't feel so happy at the moment". Here, the "so" means "very".
It's generally a bad idea to use rhetorical questions in informal writing. It's for very special occasions in public speaking and emotional writing. In addition, your sentence is missing an important word: "Why do I want to talk about chocolate?"
"Commodities" is the wrong word. Native speakers don't use it when talking about going to a "market" if the that word means "supermarket". We generally say "food", "groceries", "something to eat", or "stuff".
"What I bought is food, in other words, all chocolate." "Chocolate isn't really food. It may have some food value, but it's candy, dessert, or something to eat after you've eaten your dinner.
You should put "commodities market" into the search window on Google or Yahoo! and see what you find. I think you'll be surprised.
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